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Siege in Fog Chapter 14.1

It seems to be the calm before the storm… Maybe that explains all the 🌬🍃 imagery recently?

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‘…he wanted to engrave her in his heart.’ — Ch. 14.1 © 12

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Ch. 14.1

Qin Sang seemed to have lost all her strength as she slumped slightly back against the sofa.

He stretched out a hand as though he wanted to touch her cheek. He did not, in the end. The room was so quiet that the sound of the wind blowing outside was audible, one keening gust after another, like the sound of someone crying. Perhaps it was snowing again, or perhaps it was the trees outside as they brushed against the windows with a rustling sound. Her face was pale and only her lips had a hint of red. Her figure — so frail it was almost childlike — was vulnerable and disconsolate. But she was not looking at him. In her heart, she knew as well that it was futile. Moreover, this was such a dangerous place especially when Yi Liankai could return at any time. He could not have been willing to say so much to her but she had driven him to it — driven him with her words.

He withdrew his hand. The gentle mistiness in his eyes had disappeared; his expression had gradually recovered and become calm: ‘I should go, otherwise Zhu Ma will start to wonder.’

She finally nodded slowly. He turned round, walked to the door, unlocked it and walked straight out.

Zhu Ma had gone downstairs to get some dim sum and after some time, she came back up bearing a red lacquer tray. On it was a bowl of shredded chicken noodles, some side dishes and a plate of steamed buns stuffed with chicken hearts. When she entered the room with the steaming¹ bowl of noodles, she saw Qin Sang sitting alone, nose red, as though she had been crying.

¹ 熱氣騰騰 rèqì-téngténg: steaming hot. If you’re not reading this chapter at MerakiTranslations, it has been stolen and reproduced by bootleg websites.

Worried that she was angry because of Yi Liankai, Zhu Ma thus put down the tray and grumbled: ‘Master is also too much. Even if he isn’t coming back for dinner, he should at least telephone home. It looks like it’s going to snow again and he ought to spare a thought for you at home, waiting and worrying about him.’

For her part, Qin Sang seemed a little distracted, still preoccupied with her own thoughts. Zhu Ma said: ‘Missy, do eat something. Even if you don’t feel like it, you mustn’t let the baby go hungry…’

Such a remark was not worth mentioning but upon hearing it, Qin Sang felt even more burdened², hence she frowned and replied: ‘Zhu Ma, I don’t feel like eating. Clear all this away.’

² 愁腸百結 chóucháng-bǎijié: hundred knots of worry in one’s intestines (idiom); weighed down with anxiety. Translation originally published at tranzgeek(DOT)wordpress(DOT)com.

‘Even if you don’t feel like it, you ought to eat a little bit,’ Zhu Ma said coaxingly. ‘You were supposed to have lunch with Miss Yao but ended up not eating. If you don’t have a little dinner, you might feel worse later.’

Qin Sang was extremely irritated. After observing her expression, Zhu Ma left the tray on the table and, with an air of minding her own business, went out of the room. She had just neared the staircase when she heard the sound of the telephone ringing, long and repeatedly. She thought that it must be Yi Liankai specially calling to say he wouldn’t be coming home for dinner so she teetered down the stairs in her bound feet, with the intention of answering it. Before she could reach the bottom of the stairs, the call had been taken by another servant who, after listening for a short while, looked up and asked: ‘Zhu Ma, is Young Mistress asleep? It’s the city defence command calling°. They say they have something urgent to tell Young Mistress.’

Zhu Ma found this strange. Since it was a call from the city defence command, it must be about official business but they would usually look for Yi Liankai. If they couldn’t reach him, then at most they would speak with his secretary or his adjutant. Hence she said, ‘Young Mistress is still up. I’ll go ask her to connect the line.’

A telephone had originally been installed in Qin Sang’s room but Yi Liankai had disconnected it for fear it would disturb her rest. Whenever she wanted to use the telephone, she would have to plug in the line. After another exchange on the telephone, the servant hastily hailed Zhu Ma and said, ‘I’ll just inform Adjutant Pan rather than disturb Young Mistress.’

Zhu Ma thought nothing more of it. She continued downstairs and procured a plate of green plums that she brought upstairs. Qin Sang, seeing her with the plums, was caught between amusement and annoyance³ and said, ‘I don’t feel like eating those.’

³ 啼笑皆非 tíxiào-jiēfēi: lit. not to know whether to laugh or cry (idiom). Please consider reading from MerakiTranslations rather than at bootleg websites.

Zhu Ma said: ‘Sour for boys, spicy for girls. If you don’t feel like sour food, perhaps it’s a little Missy?’

Qin Sang, already fretting, was hardly in the mood to joke around with her about such things so she only frowned and said, ‘Leave it, leave it. Go get me a cup of hot tea.’
Zhu Ma was just about to do so when someone called out ‘Report’ from outside. It was Pan Jianchi.

As they had just spoken in secret, Qin Sang was feeling guilty and couldn’t help being startled. After a pause, she asked, ‘What is it?’

Pan Jianchi answered: ‘There’s an urgent matter and I’ve come to ask for leave.’

Qin Sang, much mystified, said, ‘Come in then.’

Pan Jianchi entered and saw her sitting on the sofa as though she had not moved at all, her eyes slightly red like she had just been crying. He knew the reason why and his heart softened in spite of himself. However, it was hardly the time to talk about that now. Hence he said, ‘Madam, Master has some business and has sent for me.’

This was nothing unusual but Qin Sang’s suspicions were instantly aroused. If it really were the case that Yi Liankai had sent for Pan Jianchi on official business, then there would be no need to inform her of it specially. She looked up at him. His expression was very calm but his eyes betrayed him for he was staring at her almost greedily, as though he wanted to carve her image with his eyes, or rather, with this gaze, he wanted to engrave her in his heart. An ominous feeling welled up in her heart and she asked, ‘Where is your Master now?’

‘At Commander Yao’s.’ He lowered his gaze as though scorched by her line of sight. ‘If there’s nothing else, Madam, I’ll take my leave.’

‘You’re not to go.’ She seemed shocked at the tone of her own voice but added immediately, ‘It’s already so late, what official business can there be? Just tell him I said so; tell him to come back first. Whatever it is can wait until tomorrow.’

Pan Jianchi smiled a little resignedly: ‘The Commander is busy with important matters…’

‘No matter how important, he can’t be skipping meals or going without sleep.’ Qin Sang frowned and said, ‘Zhu Ma, telephone to Commander Yao’s°° residence. Say that I’m feeling unwell and be sure to tell him he should come home quickly.’

Zhu Ma was alarmed and said, ‘Missy, you’re not feeling well? We should send for a physician quickly…’

‘The physician just left, what’s the point of sending for him again?’ Qin Sang said dismissively. ‘I’m just feeling uncomfortable and I’ll be fine once he comes back, so go and telephone him quickly.’

Zhu Ma was elated, thinking that this Missy had seen the light⁴ at last and finally learnt the art of throwing a tantrum.5 What was more, now that she was with child, it went without saying that Master would have to give in to her a little. It was with such pleasing thoughts that Zhu Ma went to make the call.

開竅 kāi//qiào: have one’s ideas straightened out; enlightened
5 撒嬌 sā//jiāo: 1. to act like a spoiled child. 2. to throw a tantrum. 3. to act coquettishly. Translation originally published at tranzgeek(DOT)wordpress(DOT)com.

Pan Jianchi shook his head slightly which Qin Sang understood. This was not going to help matters much: she could delay but not postpone it forever. If Yi Liankai had really become suspicious of Pan Jianchi, then all her delaying tactics were useless. But still she had to try; anything was better than helplessly watching him go to his death.


🆕 🎶 A song that seems to fit Chapter 14.🎶

12’s notes:
° The city defence command appears to have moved to Commander Yao’s residence. To distinguish between the two, I translate it as ‘city defence command’. The old headquarters where Liankai and Qin Sang are residing in is translated as ‘city defence headquarters’. In Ch. 13.3, Min Hongyu had told Liankai they were going out again shortly but did not say where.
°° Commander Yao’s official rank is division commander. Liankai is Chief Commander of the Coalition Army.

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18 thoughts on “Siege in Fog Chapter 14.1”

  1. Thank you 12 for this chapter !
    I think that QS and PJC are realistic they know now that their relationship ship doesnt have a future anymore it ended the day he made up his mind and when she got married
    I hope that QS can move on akd look at the future because now her life count as three YLK her akd the baby and YLK is the only and her baby left fir her
    I loved the moment when the weather was crying for her and the moment when ZM brough her the plum i was curious about the result i am routing for a boy XD like a little YLK with a mother like QS will be lucky

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    1. Haha! I vote for dragon phoenix twins, if only they were possible!
      Zhu Ma would probably think this weather is bad for Qin Sang’s health LOL She’s unremittingly practical 😂
      🌬💕💕

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  2. Nope, QS is too emotionally weak when it comes to PJC she won’t be able to completely get over him just yet. It’s been three years her behavior shows that she is still too soft when it comes to him. He has given his heart to revenge there is no turning back. PJC may care about her but cares more about revenge if she was smart she would’ve given up on him already and not let this drag on. She is sentimental when it comes to him he could use this to his advantage too. I’m starting to not like QS she has the right to not be happy about her forced marriage but she shouldn’t get into her husband’s business too much. She doesn’t really know what other agendas PJC and YLK may have–throwing yourself in a fire not knowing what kind of fire it is way too dangerous!

    I found it a bit strange when PJC revealed he wanted to get rid of the warlords it didn’t really faze her that YLK could also be eliminated in the process (now I see why YLK’s brother was so pissed at her in the trailer). But then again she loathes him so much maybe she doesn’t mind him being killed either. Her little discreet acts of manipulating YLK’s affections to protect her ex-lover is risky–it could get all of them killed. QS is a hypocrite too she hates it that YLK is corrupted but protects JPC who is also in the same boat. So frustrating and such a tragedy! On another note I hope she keeps baby #2 or the “twins” be sad if she doesn’t or couldn’t. I have a strong feeling that no matter what happens YLK will ultimately sacrifice himself for her sake. Personally, I don’t think it’s really worth it but he is a crazy guy and so is she.

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    1. Those are some really solid points, Under The Moon! Thank you for taking the time to pen your thoughts 🙂

      I was just about to agree that Qin Sang doesn’t seem to object to the destruction of the warlords. She definitely thinks they are ruining the country and they need to be removed from power. But I recall now that in Ch. 8.3, she had said to Jianchi that without Murong Chen in the north, the railway would have been seized by the Russians (and she also objected to their plans to assassinate Murong Feng). So I think that after she saw the consequences of helping him (assassination of the Japanese secret emissary), she realised that some very ‘repugnant’ methods are needed to realise all those high-minded ideals and she’s backed away slowly.

      Manipulating Liankai’s affections definitely doesn’t look good but I don’t think she’s immune to his charm and the more loving she acts, the harder for her to remain uninvolved. And Master Yi has no objections to that either! 😂

      I would argue that compared to the men in the novel, what sets Qin Sang apart is her stronger attachment to people. Liankai is past master at making use of and discarding almost everyone around him; Jianchi is also making use of her to some degree. He was someone she was willing to elope with only a few years ago so not wanting to see him die is quite natural, I think. From her perspective, he really has nothing and no one left — only his life and his cause. It’s one thing to let him go his way but quite another to not care at all if he dies. It would be a bit out of character if she were so callous.
      But perhaps the author is being intentionally vague for now to keep open all possibilities and keep us guessing… 😅

      The “twins” are definitely my wishful thinking haha!

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      1. I could see how QS feels about things but she doesn’t know too much about the men’s world diving in too deep without knowing the real deal is too risky. People know she is precious to YLK so that is dangerous–look how YLK’s brother made use of her hoping to trap YLK in the earlier chapters and how easily PJC could get her to help him–red flags everywhere (now she is pregnant bad timing to get involved further). I wish she was smarter and learned more from what happened last time, she is educated so I expect her to be more critical and analytical. It’s okay if she never loves YLK but using him to help PJC is wrong he is a big potential threat (I really think PJC is a questionable character) she trust him too much like he is some lost puppy and that could backfire in a really gruesome way. These men are way more clever and deceiving than she thinks, she is a chess piece against the Kings of this game it’s not going to end well at this rate. If it were me I would make use of YLK’s affections, work my way to have him trust me, and see what kind of person he really is before disposing of him. You’re stuck with him either way better to make good use of him to see if he is a real bad guy or not before helping your ex cause a revolution/annihilation that may or may not be needed. It would be a twisted plot if she blindly trust PJC but it turns out her husband was the real antihero who she brought to his doom (greek tragedy!). But twins would be good any number of babies would be good by now haha!

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        1. I should note yes QS did mention MF & MC who did some good but that could have come off to PJC as “Don’t kill those two but the rest wipe them all, maybe my husband too–which is completely okay” lol. She married him for three years she could have found out 60% of who he is by now if she really wanted to make good use of him. JPC changed for the worst but she tends to just let it go and act like a mom lecturing and protecting him. Could be that she doesn’t care about her life or her child’s life that’s why she continues to stick her head in their affairs but I could be wrong. I think QS needs emergency therapy she isn’t in the right mind to assist anyone since she seem to have depression anyways.

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        2. But her attitude was one of resignation and not wanting to have anything to do with Liankai from the beginning. Not a healthy attitude to be sure but that’s the starting point laid down in the story. It’s not till much later that she begins to get to know her husband.

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        3. Their whole relationship has been sour from the start it went from rocky to crazy lol. YLK is twisted so I want to know more about him. Hopefully the author explains everything by the end and not keep us wondering in the dark for life haha.

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        4. Haha! That’s a very pragmatic approach! 😂 The points raised are good ones though because they get explored in later chapters. Ch. 13 actually marks a shift in gears and the proverbial chickens are coming home to roost, chapter by chapter, so have fun discovering them! 😉

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